Arkalphaze
This is just a shameless review from the author XD First of all, this novel is my very first novel I ever made and the first work of writing that I ever write. I admit that the beginning of the novel had a very terrible storytelling and grammar, but trust me I'm trying my best to improve it and I already had as you could see my english is improving if you continue reading. The first volume is an experiment, while the second volume is where the real thing is made (In my opinion). So I hope that you guys will at least read until tens of chapters before giving a harsh review. And to explain it to you, the title is The King of Tricks and Magic is a way to describe the main character. Well, just like how other people will do in another world, the first volume tells about the story where the main character got curious about fighting at the another world since the real world is a place where it's peace and trying to perform magic in another world where magic is real is kinda weird, right? So I decide to build up the world building and the characters first before going there. And to answer all of your questions, the main character will start showing his magic performance at the second volume but I can't say too much since it will become a spoiler. Thanks for reading this shameless review from me guys :)
Good luck little authorπ hope your novel does well remember if you lose aspiration for this novel take a little hiatus could be a month or more then maybe you could write this novel again remember to tell it straight up to your readers that your taking a break or it might be really serious and you could just quit this novel again remember to tell the audience that is all my advice π.
With much enthusiasm and avidity, the author presents us with an engaging story. The storyline, as well as the presentation and design of the characters throughout the story, continue to be appealing and winsome. Sadly, I do have to add that there are a lot of mistakes concerning grammar and vocabulary - and thatβs alright, everyone makes them - yet I believe it would be a pity since this work has some potential. It simply needs to be polished into the gem it might be. I truly believe that this work could profit from an experienced and/or skilled editor so that it might develop into more. Overall, I find it to be a relaxing and engaging read, very suited for this platform. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
Though the novelβs grammar does get better the beginning chapters make no sense due to the horrendous grammar the character interactions are unrealistic and feel annoying to read after a while so overall this is a novel with a great premise but an author who doesn't edit or reread before posting causing the story to be subpar
It's a little weird to me to be honest. It just feels weird reading the story; there isn't much description and a lot of the story is first person (which I dont have too many issues with). The english is pretty bad, but it's reasonable considering the author's first language isn't english. However, his English just ruins it for me though an editor might be able to fix this issue.
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Love it. Considered novel. Wish you the best luck :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)