It's a little weird to me to be honest. It just feels weird reading the story; there isn't much description and a lot of the story is first person (which I dont have too many issues with). The english is pretty bad, but it's reasonable considering the author's first language isn't english. However, his English just ruins it for me though an editor might be able to fix this issue.
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