THE HELL ON EARTH

While the story has a few grammatical mistakes, the creative storyline makes you ignore them. The author shows some of the struggles people have to face in their life. A sad truth. Keep up the good work.

I love this book very much. More power to your elbow. Despite that, this your first story you still try thank your[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Writing this piece of work as beautiful as this as your first work is awesome The story was amazing all through, chapter by chapter, the sequence is very nice

A big qudos to the author, I have to read this again because the story is getting more interesting chapter by chapter and I love it the more. With an editor, you'll be more fantastic

Great book! innovative and creative world background. characters are imaginative and realistic! keep up the good work, I'll look forward to more chapters.

I've been following this and I've been amazed and really love all I've been reading and I'm still waiting for more from this author. Really enjoy reading this piece of artwork

So amazing for a start, I love your courage the sky is the starting point keep on striving and you will do it. The story line is also a good one I

The story line is really good and it has strong characters developing greatly, but the author should improve on the writing and description in the story. Otherwise, nice one! [img=recommend]

I liked the plot btw just a little bit of trimming and novel would be great. It looked like that the author had already put up many efforts in novel. More power to writer.

This is one of the best novel have read this year...the writer deserve a very good appreciation... For the comments have seen, it show that the novel is her first novel to wrote, which is very interesting and amazing..... Keep it up !!!

In all honesty, this story is such an interesting read! It oozes of emotions that keep one reading till the very last statement. I would say the writer exhibited awesome storytelling and writing skills, and that's highly commendable.

To be honest, this is a Nice story . I enjoy reading it and it something everyone out there should read. Keep up the good work author. I love the way the characters were designed and the narrative point of view used by the author. I would love to read More of your books

Thought it gonna be a short story at the start but I'm really fascinated that it's a long story. It been so interesting from start till now. It really a nice piece of work

Thank you for reading this novel. You will love it. It's about Hadiza who's was a victim of human trafficking, and she was trained to kill people. All she wants is freedom. Liam was a detective, who's want to catch all the criminals but he later fall in love with Hadizah without knowing her true identity. Will, he later know? How will he react to it? You find all that in the book.

It's always a pleasure reading this book and it's been lovely so far The way everything is set and choice of words are amazing. I can't wait to read more