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The use of tense

Thought it gonna be a short story at the start but I'm really fascinated that it's a long story. It been so interesting from start till now. It really a nice piece of work

Awesome as always

The choice of words are awesome It's really a nice piece of art Thumb up

It's always a pleasure reading this book and it's been lovely so far The way everything is set and choice of words are amazing. I can't wait to read more

Ive tried to read each chapter again and again because I found it amazing and sweet, I really like it. Just a little review and a good editor and you'll be world class writer

A big qudos to the author, I have to read this again because the story is getting more interesting chapter by chapter and I love it the more. With an editor, you'll be more fantastic