KingMaxDemigod
This is one of the best novels on this website. I have been waiting for this reboot for years. I am happy to read this for free before it goes premium. The plot is really good, both of the main characters are good. I can't wait for the next chapters. It is a great novel, you should definitely try it.
The story is good so far and the characters seem to be interesting. There also seems to be a few interesting concepts in this story, and I believe you can make the novel pretty great in the future. Also, try and re-read after each chapter you right just in case you have some grammar mistakes so that you can fix them instead of leaving them there. The story has potential, so keep it up. (Grimoire)
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The story is actually pretty cool as soon as i started reading I was wandering where this was going to lead quite the interesting way as well when they dissapeared i was thinking that they would die some way or another and meet god or somethimg. Just pointing out that some words have a wrong letter in spelling but that was very minor anyway hope you keep writing this story is good just asking what is going on with the main characters luck is their bad and good luck turned neutral like evryone elses or is when thay are together thay have normal luck. Also hope you keep writing the other novel to liked that one to. The characters need more description on how they look readers will want to know more about what they look like.
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