Review Detail of Yue_Hajime in The Harem King- A Fantasy Land

Item: The Harem King- A Fantasy Land
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

Yue_HajimeLv104yrYue_Hajime

The story is good so far and the characters seem to be interesting. There also seems to be a few interesting concepts in this story, and I believe you can make the novel pretty great in the future. Also, try and re-read after each chapter you right just in case you have some grammar mistakes so that you can fix them instead of leaving them there. The story has potential, so keep it up. (Grimoire)

The Harem King- A Fantasy Land

KingMaxDemigod

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Yue_HajimeLv10Yue_Hajime

Welp, meant to say Write instead of Right in the second part. .-.

4yr

KingMaxDemigodAuthorKingMaxDemigod

Thanks for the review and the advice, its much appreciated

4yr

Yue_HajimeLv10Yue_Hajime

Yup, you can ask me for advice on discord anytime since I have wrote like 35 novels to date xD

KingMaxDemigod:Thanks for the review and the advice, its much appreciated

4yr

KingMaxDemigodAuthorKingMaxDemigod

Doesn't that make you King Of Novel Dropping?

Yue_Hajime:Yup, you can ask me for advice on discord anytime since I have wrote like 35 novels to date xD

4yr

Yue_HajimeLv10Yue_Hajime

xD I guess so. I just dropped them mainly because I don't got the time to write them or some of them were just novels with 1-5 chapters I randomly wrote for no reason.

KingMaxDemigod:Doesn't that make you King Of Novel Dropping?

4yr