Review Detail of Taurus99 in The Harem King- A Fantasy Land
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The story is actually pretty cool as soon as i started reading I was wandering where this was going to lead quite the interesting way as well when they dissapeared i was thinking that they would die some way or another and meet god or somethimg. Just pointing out that some words have a wrong letter in spelling but that was very minor anyway hope you keep writing this story is good just asking what is going on with the main characters luck is their bad and good luck turned neutral like evryone elses or is when thay are together thay have normal luck. Also hope you keep writing the other novel to liked that one to. The characters need more description on how they look readers will want to know more about what they look like.
The Harem King- A Fantasy Land
KingMaxDemigod
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Cool thanks for the reply and just asking im cool with you not answer but how often will you update chapters on this and others you've written
KingMaxDemigod:Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!! Yes their good luck and bad luck are neutralized when they're together but thats wasn't supposed to be revealed until later 😂😂😂😂 As for descriptions....Well I'll try and fit that in and thank you for your advie
Taurus99:Cool thanks for the reply and just asking im cool with you not answer but how often will you update chapters on this and others you've written