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The Great Machine Sage

Harlyboy

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LegendaryAxolotl
LegendaryAxolotlLv1LegendaryAxolotl

The combination of technology and magic. I have seen a few novels like this before, but I must say this one has the most potential. At least the MC didn't have 200+ IQ but still make a dumb decision. He lost his memory but most of his personality was still intact. I really like the premise of this story. In the first chapter, I know the author promised us that there will be a mech and battleship in the future. He also gave us a glance at what he would become. Maybe he will become stronger than his peak in this strange universe. Anyway. If you guys like technology VS Magic/cultivator. Interesting MC and side characters. Mysterious past, and potential worldbuilding, then I recommend this book.

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Harlyboy
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Hello, this is the author's shameless review here. I hope you guys like the story and how I write it. If you don't make sure to let me know in the comment. I'm going to update two to three times a week this month, But If I got the MGS contract then I will update every day. So expect more chapters to come!

MiasmaLotus
MiasmaLotusLv15MiasmaLotus

The writing is simply way to fast like you just blowing through the beginning. like tasks 20 chapters to go from only having pants to literally having an army. there in not really much indepth background on any of the characters. and the world background is self is very minimal. But I do like the intent of the story line quite a bit.

emonguwu
emonguwuLv1emonguwu

I really like your novels which makes me happy watching novels I try to watch novels even though I don't like them but when I watch your novels I feel very happy so I really like your novels

StormFireReborn
StormFireRebornLv12StormFireReborn

kingdom building with decent amount of combat . I like the weapon creation parts of the story . lots of potential I'm not great at reviews .

onemeterofsky
onemeterofskyLv4onemeterofsky

The story has an interesting concept. This is a world where Science would try to fight against Cultivation. The author also offers different perspectives on each side by representing them with compelling side characters. The weakness here, if you may, is that the MC seemed to be at the back row most of the times. The side characters were doing the heavy lifting and experiences the challenges that the MC should also somewhat encounter. Nonetheless the eternal dilema between the two opposing side is a very good premise.

Stormzz
StormzzLv13Stormzz

The story's got an interesting premise and is fairly well paced. Scene descriptions and the exposition given in the first chapter is also pretty well done. Writing quality could be improved a bit, I noticed a wide amount of small errors crop up.

Rayne_Rue
Rayne_RueLv11Rayne_Rue

Great book love the concept about everything, good job author keep it up, would really love to read more as soon as I get time, GREAT WORK !!!!

YIANUWANGXIAO
YIANUWANGXIAOLv2YIANUWANGXIAO

A very nice story with a solid plot. It has enough intrigue to pull you in from just reading the synopsis. Amazing work author! [img=recommend]

Marianne_2020
Marianne_2020Lv4Marianne_2020

I was absolutely taken by surprise, wow this book is amazing, my first time reading this type of genre and I love it. it was engaging and easily grab the attention of the reader's mind. well done.

senshiAuthor
senshiAuthorLv3senshiAuthor

Without a doubt, this story is definitely the gem. Story development and writing quality expresses me the most. Absolutely worth time of reading.

ape_nguinta
ape_nguintaLv2ape_nguinta

I really love the premise. I can see already that he would built an entire army around him or make lots of money by selling weapons. This is the thing that I am looking for in a story. The battle scene is also unpredictable. You won't know who win or lose in the scene

NonSagaLegend
NonSagaLegendLv1NonSagaLegend

This is what I call quality stories. I love the premises of technology against magic. And it seems like this novel is going to be similar to World online in building army or group

Morororo
MorororoLv3Morororo

Haven't read the novel fully yet but it's fun to read and the story is most interesting, looking forward to reading it again. Great job author! 👍

pedro_corti
pedro_cortiLv1pedro_corti

This book is way different from others. The plot intrigues each time when it comes to a cliffhanger, so readers deal with large amount of emotions. Well-designed character development is what I needed here to be completely involved

NoelleClarke
NoelleClarkeLv11NoelleClarke

This immersive story is extremely eye catching! The author has simply put us in a futuristic realm and displayed it well. Descriptions of surroundings and characters are on point! I actually like the MC as he is quite funny and stubborn. I believe he will have a good development in the coming chapters. Definitely added this to my library and recommend :)

Wansx
WansxLv1Wansx

The story is engaging and grab the attention of the reader to read it more and more. Although it is only 10 chapter so far, i hope the update will be faster so that i can continue it

Calm_Mountains
Calm_MountainsLv3Calm_Mountains

The story has great start, it is a very nice and interesting story. Although, i have only read its starting, i can already say its gonna be amazing. I am going to read this one to the end. I recommend this novel!

strangetrain516
strangetrain516Lv15strangetrain516

really good story but you focus too much on other things such as the cultivators hunting ..,.,.,..,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.. .,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,

Demon_Cat_6837
Demon_Cat_6837Lv1Demon_Cat_6837

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