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senshiAuthor

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A couple of two Asian male authors who want to create the best in their compositions.

2021-12-18 JoinedSouth Korea
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor1yr
    Commented

    Oh holy sh, finally this is back

    Azuma was panting on the ground, a sheen layer of cold sweat covered him as his vision blurred and became cloudy.
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    At least they managed to survive lol His abilities manifested as I kept reading this chap closely. A lot of pleasure I gain reading it, really, so thanks for the chapter!

    "To the exit!" Azuma called out, "Now!"
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    Torfinn moment The greatness epitomizes the humbleness.

    Azuma took out two of his knives, slashing them across a hunter who looked unfazed. He let his instincts take control, to have the system guide his moves as he was slammed down on the ground.
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    The only one who thinks rationally.

    Azuma whispered, "Then we must make a way."
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    Your writing style is getting more Light Novelish :)) It's 100% suitable to the story itself, and it's nice to see how your writing gets better and better

    Ch 9 Golden Dungeon
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    ERROR! ERROR!

    "I think…" Azuma rubbed his temples, "Someone is injured, let me check it out."
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    Honestly, after Elden Ring this chap gives me distinctive chills, and my imagination flows as I feel every single emotions of them. It's great of a chapter

    Ch 8 The Garden of Gods
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    How come they already started using -sama? I thought they weren't cause enough to themselves as they met each other not so long ago. But I can relate to it

    "It belongs to Misaki–sama," Haru said, the puzzlement growing in her eyes, "Is this… blood?"
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    I would cry praising this story if the underground had its own time and they really wandered for a long time

    TRPR/9823: It's clearly been a long time
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    A whole underground kingdom?

    The two of them walk down the empty corridors of a buried underground temple. There were statues of gods and goddesses, mythical creatures, and stranger things carved out in the stone walls.
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    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Replied to senshiAuthor

    There is nothing to say a lot about my impressions so far, because I'm not certain and it's not easy to judge by the first chapters

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    Aristocracy
    Horror · Taida_Suzuki
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Posted

    The prologue was exhilirating to read, it gave me psychological discussion mood, lol. By the way, the first five chapters are interesting as the story cannot uncover all events that happened. Since it's only the start of the story (I'm currently at 6th chap), I'm 100% confident to say that I'll surely be reading it forth just to know if there is a real thing beyond the veil!

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    Aristocracy
    Horror · Taida_Suzuki
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    Sounds strange to describe of herself over everyone else. She seems to be an egocentric? Still I don't even know her character.

    Is it wrong that I am born with a huge advantage over everyone else? Is my intelligence the only thing that people wanted from me?
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    Aristocracy
    Horror · Taida_Suzuki
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    Beautiful respond. Another sigma rule to be pinned

    The guy stared at me then pulled a bad finger, and walked away.
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    Aristocracy
    Horror · Taida_Suzuki
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    No way XD Electrocars are for hillbllies

    "Breaking News! A student has discovered a way to transfer Rabbit's DNA into herself, and grew Rabbit Ears!"
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    Aristocracy
    Horror · Taida_Suzuki
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    Here I remembered Ayanokoji with his question, "Is there equality in this world?" I gave the analogy because I like psychology and this kind of thinking. It's very interesting

    Do we live in a world where everybody can be happy? No.
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    Aristocracy
    Horror · Taida_Suzuki
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Commented

    Great start.

    It doesn't matter, right? As long as you have that drive to reach the top, you can be whoever you want. Whether you just want a simple life or the strength to be the prime minister or a leader of a large community, as long as you have the talent and skills, you can achieve all of those things.
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    Aristocracy
    Horror · Taida_Suzuki
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Posted

    A neat, easy-going, and relatively gentle work. A beautiful cover possessing a decent and pleasing vibe — it's nice to know that the author tried to find something interesting, similar to the feel of his work, to put in the cover. The effortless beginning comforts the reader with an understandable writing style, so everyone can read it!

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    Rebirth Of Love
    Fantasy · sun_writer
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Replied to EldritchBlade

    Grammar mistakes... Thanks again, as I've noticed I made many mistakes that actually can put a reader to misunderstanding

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    Over the Bridges to Singing Waterfalls
    Teen · senshiAuthor
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  • senshiAuthor
    senshiAuthor2yr
    Replied to EldritchBlade

    Oh, there is a grammar mistake. I'm sorry

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    Over the Bridges to Singing Waterfalls
    Teen · senshiAuthor
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