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strangetrain516
strangetrain516Lv152yrstrangetrain516

really good story but you focus too much on other things such as the cultivators hunting ..,.,.,..,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.. .,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,

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The Great Machine Sage

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Harlyboy
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That was like 3 chapters out of 100...

strangetrain516
strangetrain516Lv15strangetrain516

I get that I just felt maby it was just I bit too in depth as if they were a character close to the main character but they will probably die in about 20 ch. or sofrom my prospective

Harlyboy:That was like 3 chapters out of 100...
strangetrain516
strangetrain516Lv15strangetrain516

other then that it is still really good 👌

Harlyboy:That was like 3 chapters out of 100...
Harlyboy
HarlyboyAuthorHarlyboy

thanks

strangetrain516:other then that it is still really good 👌