really good story but you focus too much on other things such as the cultivators hunting ..,.,.,..,.,.,. ..,.,.,.,.. .,.,.,.,.,. ,.,.,.,.,.,.,
Harlyboy
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LIKEI get that I just felt maby it was just I bit too in depth as if they were a character close to the main character but they will probably die in about 20 ch. or sofrom my prospective
Harlyboy:That was like 3 chapters out of 100...