Dark_SnowMan
With a cute and bouncy accomplice, the mc goes on a life of adventure in a new world. If this can be polished more, this novel has the potential to be well received and liked by many. In terms of polishing, I have pointed out some grammar errors, but if I were to be more specific, I would most of them consisted of run-on sentences, misplaced commas, and overused ellipses. However, despite all this, this is a novel worth reading as the plot continues to ‘thickens’, much like a certain slime.
I highly recommend this story this is so good y'all I've read many novels, and omg some are so hard to grasp the concept of, but this is so good as the writing quality is like watching a movie that's how understandable it is Your book is mind-blowing! Seriously, I really love your MC. I find myself grinning reading it. You described the story plot in detail. I really love MC's with don't care what's happening to my attitude. Despite facing death, he can still think logically. I salute him! The first chapter got me all hooked up and interested. After posting this review. I'll definitely support this book! You did a splendid job on it. Keep up the good work author!
Man, why so few reviews?! Your book is mind-blowing! Seriously, I really love your MC. I'm still in Chapter 2 and I find myself grinning while reading it. Books with character transition is not my kind of plate. But this? God it's awesome! You described the story plot in detail. I really love MC's with don't care what's happening to me attitude. Despite facing death, he can still think logically. I salute him! The first chapter got me all hook up and interested. After posting this review I'm gonna read it whole in one go. I'll definitely support this book! You did a splendid job on it. Keep up the good work author! P.S. Just wanna ask if you update your book often.