With a cute and bouncy accomplice, the mc goes on a life of adventure in a new world. If this can be polished more, this novel has the potential to be well received and liked by many. In terms of polishing, I have pointed out some grammar errors, but if I were to be more specific, I would most of them consisted of run-on sentences, misplaced commas, and overused ellipses. However, despite all this, this is a novel worth reading as the plot continues to ‘thickens’, much like a certain slime.
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