Reviews of The Flames of Darkness (Old)

The story is good so far the author tries to make it seem like you are the character and they do a pretty good job at this I can't wait for the next chapter

First impression I got was, "It's a second person POV!" which is very unique these days. World background is good and the story was very easy to follow so far, it has potential if the story progression can keep up with the current phase. If only the author could improve his editorial styles, this could be more enjoyable. (By the time this review was posted) The author need to pay attentions on line spacings and need to use quotations for dialogues to increase the readability.

While it's too early to make final judgments storywise it's pretty good. The author writes it in a unique first-person PoV which makes you feel like you are the MC going through those experiences. However, there are a few grammar mistakes and word choice could be better. Also SPACING. I know the author is fixing this but at the time I'm writing this review the spacing is really bad. It's all in one paragraph. But don't let that discourage you. I think most people won't regret reading this novel and it'll only get better with time. Also FemMC.