Review Detail of DestinedLemon in The Flames of Darkness (Old)

While it's too early to make final judgments storywise it's pretty good. The author writes it in a unique first-person PoV which makes you feel like you are the MC going through those experiences. However, there are a few grammar mistakes and word choice could be better. Also SPACING. I know the author is fixing this but at the time I'm writing this review the spacing is really bad. It's all in one paragraph. But don't let that discourage you. I think most people won't regret reading this novel and it'll only get better with time. Also FemMC.