BaeVida
Nice start, showing the loving relationship between the father and daughter even after his demise. Nice synopsis, I must say it got me hooked, I really want to know who betrayed her. Good description, and dialogue, author is trying. Just starting so I can't say much about update stability but carry on. Good luck with spirity. You have my votes.
Nice start author. I have read the previous work and I love the fact you are editing it to give your readers a better read. Nice synopsis, not your normal cultivation rebirth novel, this time she reincarnated 8 years back. Your writing quality is good, well just starting again but do hope updates are consistent. Nice description.. Good work author, keep it up.
So far, a promising read. The plot is intriguing, as well as concept. Text is understandable, but I would find myself rereading to get the gist. I suggest changing some sentence structure would do the trick. The narration could use some proofreading, since some transitions are rough. Overall, an interesting read. Keep up the good work.