Nice start, showing the loving relationship between the father and daughter even after his demise. Nice synopsis, I must say it got me hooked, I really want to know who betrayed her. Good description, and dialogue, author is trying. Just starting so I can't say much about update stability but carry on. Good luck with spirity. You have my votes.
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