Tyrone_Bedoire
So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!
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By chapter 12 the mc and everyone hes meet so far is completly unlikeable, disintersting, and everyone except mary sue princess is a couple brainvells from retarded. Mc starts out wanting to be strong and wanting to gain power quickly. 3 chapter later hes being bullied, put down, and had mary sue use mind manipulation magic on him and HE FEELS BAD FOR GETTING ANGRY AFTER HE GOT DISRESPECTED TO HIS FACE AND SHE USES MAGIC TO AFFECT HIS MIND. I just wish i could give the story .05/5. Completly gutted his own story and didnt make it chapter 20. The most likeable character? The dead enemies the mc killed that are just animals trying to survive.
Great potential until the MC decided to lick humanity's ass and be their pawn. Bullied boy, hates society, etc etc. As a wolf all of that is irrelevant because you know..forced plot must happen. Just..Author, please try to know that if you pick a monster MC, at least try to stick with the monster part. Or just name it "The Divine Wolf..." and stop there. Just remove the or cause that's all he is. A pet. A waste of a novel idea.
This story was off to a decent start, with only a few inconsistencies, but it quickly went downhill from there. The author introduces several new elements to the story, only to suddenly remove them, as if he decided to suddenly change the direction of the story, with so apparent purpose, but the biggest issue I had with the story is the redundant info. In almost every chapter there are one or more entirely redundant paragraphs that either told me absolutely nothing or something that's so obvious a toddler wouldn't need it explained, and as a result I found myself skimming/skipping a lot of the story, and probably missing some of the important stuff. Author should really work on prioritizing what info to keep along instead of padding the story in excess, i.e. a full paragraph of monsters nearing the camp, but MC just had to release his aura so it wasn't a problem anyway. If it wasn't a problem anyway, don't bother telling people about it.
As a fan of novels that let you turn your brain or live out your power fantasy I still found this novel to be lackluster the writer is not using his genre to his full potential and abuses the simplest shortcuts it provides. The most boring aspect of this novel is the overly blank slate protagonist. Overall itβs a very good concept it just needs iron out in many places this novel reminds me of a story I tried to write but didnβt have enough time for. Wish this novel was done better but good job to author for getting his work out there
LOVE THIS NOVEL THE MC IS NOT A FUCKING BETA JAPANESE MC HE PRETTY STUPID IN EARLY CHAP BUT DONT WORRY HE WILL CHANGE HOPE AUTHOR WILL NOT MAKE HIM A GENERIC CHINESE MC anyway the grammar is pretty good (for me at least) The updates are stable for now οΌββ½βοΌ I would like to know more about the world and how he reincarnated, author will probably explain a little in next chapter. Please don't make him change to human early on since its the whole point of this novel (#^.^#) Again love this novel Keep up with the good work! *CULTURE WILL LAST FOREVER!* γ(οΏ£ΟοΏ£γ)(γοΏ£β³οΏ£)γ
Originally I gave this story a 1.8 after the first 12 chapters then the next chapter the author finally makes the MC better and then immediately after that makes the MC a dumb beta again lol then somehow the princess thatβs trying to manipulate him somehow gets a group of teenagers summoned to the MCs world to save them...honestly if I could rate this 0/5 I would