By chapter 12 the mc and everyone hes meet so far is completly unlikeable, disintersting, and everyone except mary sue princess is a couple brainvells from retarded. Mc starts out wanting to be strong and wanting to gain power quickly. 3 chapter later hes being bullied, put down, and had mary sue use mind manipulation magic on him and HE FEELS BAD FOR GETTING ANGRY AFTER HE GOT DISRESPECTED TO HIS FACE AND SHE USES MAGIC TO AFFECT HIS MIND. I just wish i could give the story .05/5. Completly gutted his own story and didnt make it chapter 20. The most likeable character? The dead enemies the mc killed that are just animals trying to survive.
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