Master4thWall
Writing: 5 (writing is pretty good, not what I'd call perfect but it doesn't ruin the immersion/fun and no dumb mistakes either to be seen as of yet) Updates: 5 (cant judge right now but author said to post daily so its a 5) Story Development: 5 (as per my knowledge, it is taking a unique turn with the gamer as its apparent by "cursed" part in it.) Characters: 4 (cant say much about this since there aren't many characters, but "personally" I found about two of them to be acting weird and not according to their role(?) anyways, not much of an issue but it was something that caught my eye.) World Background: 5 (because it's a multiverse fic, the worlds are developed already after all but the lore behind acquisition of gamer system is somewhat interesting.)
The story is still at start and it will be slow paced as the author said once,and keep in mind, it will be more of slice of life than action and harem is possible. I will recommend that the author should add something new to mha world because the show events happen in Japan so there's large world to explore or maybe mix other world with the current world, even thought it will be hard since most authors failed in that.
Honestly I liked most parts even if I didn’t really like everything, but once it got to clones I got a little grossed out. Then the put the nail in the proverbial coffin he shoes his women off while their going at it. up to that point I never ever assumed, that would be something the mc would do when hes so possessive. And both of those thing happened within the span of like 5 or so chapters. it’s a seriously drastic change compared to the rest of the novel and it happens so fast it’s jarring. I wouldn’t recommend if you don’t like those things like me.
This fanfiction started excellent and I really loved it all the way till chapter 160, however then start things started to go high wire as the author started to kill almost every character out there. Although they weren't main characters and only side characters in this novel fanfiction, however I still couldn't continue as I lost my interest. I would still give this story a five star rating since the writing quality, update stability, story development and character design were very good! And as a lover of MHA of course I will write this world design as five star. I don't believe I will ever come back to read this again, but it was still a nice read till chapter 160 or so.