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    Grid_17d
    Commented

    swords ftw

    -Swordsman
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    World Gate Online: The Choice
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    Grid_20d
    Commented

    This

    -"...I understand."
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    World Gate Online: The Choice
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    Grid_20d
    Replied to Orenmir

    ...

    **-"..." --- SH: 13 + WN: 12 = 25
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    World Gate Online: The Choice
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    Grid_22d
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    ...

    -"..."
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    Grid_24d
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    alright, so far so good. A genshin imact fic is rare. idk how it'll turn out in the future but it seems very promising. Author knows what he's doing and has good writing. Very interesting.

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    Genshin Impact, Breezing Through Teyvat
    Video Games · DontBanMeWebnovel
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    Grid_24d
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    Mixers are unimportant. Strive for Freedom.

    -"I'm busy. Look for someone else."
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    World Gate Online: The Choice
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    Grid_25d
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    ...can't believe not a single soul chose this

    -Turn around and walk away. Search for another exit.
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    World Gate Online: The Choice
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  • Grid_
    Grid_25d
    Commented

    sus

    "I-I don't know what you mean?"
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  • Grid_
    Grid_25d
    Commented

    sus

    "I-I don't know what you mean?"
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    Grid_27d
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    Dog +1 (just to not be a lizard)

    -Dog (Lion/Wolf/Fox...)
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    Grid_28d
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    Monke +1

    -Monkey (Gorilla/Orangutan/Ape...)
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    Grid_1mth
    Commented

    +1

    Walk away and pretend not to see anything...
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    Grid_1mth
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    Now, listen for a bit. Dwarves - Women have beards... Werebeasts - They are Furry... Elfs - They are Vegan... Humans - They are Normal Now the rest is up to you.

    Ch 1 A New World
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    Grid_1mth
    Replied to Imbreak

    HHHHHUUUUUUMAAAANNNNSSSS!!!!

    Human - Southern Continent
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    Grid_1mth
    Replied to WoofWoof

    ...srsly? u gonna nitpick about that? no offense but how are fine u on WN? The writer ain't a professional and there are bound to be some minor mistakes somewhere along the line... and by 'dumb grammar mistakes' I mean those where they don't even know which tense to use. Besides, to begin with, the mistake you pointed out, without any context to from where that line is, I can't be sure but 'have had' is grammatically correct according to my limited knowledge.

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    DC: A Spatial Manipulator
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    Grid_2mth
    Replied to RingoBrown

    haven't read it so idk but if u are a fan of LoTM, u should know Cuttlefish picks the pace slowly. It needs like 100 chaps before everything kick starts

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    Embers Ad Infinitum
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    Grid_2mth
    Replied to QuestionableReadig

    it'll upgrade to shadow monarch

    [Your Class is "Necromancer"!].
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    One Piece: Lost Monarch
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    Grid_2mth
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    well, it was decent I guess. the characters don't act their personalities. grammar is somewhat bad. MC is a named NPC and has high stats and skills despite being only age 14. He also acts pretty dumbly most of the time. The concept was interesting but I just can't take it seriously due to mc's personality(if there is even any) as well as convenient developments. I would give it 2 stars but giving 4 just to encourage the author. keep up the work. I would only say to reduce the plot armor of the Mc by a little and you might need to read Overgeared again so that the characters act their personality completely. As for writing, structuring gets better with time but do try to pay attention to tenses.

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    Reborn In Overgeared. (FF)
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    Grid_2mth
    Replied to Zacchaeus

    Nah, he didn't just buy 3. He bought many that's why "..." at the end to indicate the list is ongoing.

    "Good…Although my gold has been reduced a lot, I can earn it again through these dungeons."
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    Grid_2mth
    Replied to South_Dt

    I did mention that and yea, he won't be alone but that doesn't mean he won't take action alone ever. Not so sure which direction this specific thing will go yet. And changing them just seems 'forced', would have to BS a lot to do that XD.

    Ch 13 Blood-Red Commander Igris
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