alright, so far so good. A genshin imact fic is rare. idk how it'll turn out in the future but it seems very promising. Author knows what he's doing and has good writing. Very interesting.
Mixers are unimportant. Strive for Freedom.
...can't believe not a single soul chose this
Dog +1 (just to not be a lizard)
...srsly? u gonna nitpick about that? no offense but how are fine u on WN? The writer ain't a professional and there are bound to be some minor mistakes somewhere along the line... and by 'dumb grammar mistakes' I mean those where they don't even know which tense to use. Besides, to begin with, the mistake you pointed out, without any context to from where that line is, I can't be sure but 'have had' is grammatically correct according to my limited knowledge.
haven't read it so idk but if u are a fan of LoTM, u should know Cuttlefish picks the pace slowly. It needs like 100 chaps before everything kick starts
it'll upgrade to shadow monarch
well, it was decent I guess. the characters don't act their personalities. grammar is somewhat bad. MC is a named NPC and has high stats and skills despite being only age 14. He also acts pretty dumbly most of the time. The concept was interesting but I just can't take it seriously due to mc's personality(if there is even any) as well as convenient developments. I would give it 2 stars but giving 4 just to encourage the author. keep up the work. I would only say to reduce the plot armor of the Mc by a little and you might need to read Overgeared again so that the characters act their personality completely. As for writing, structuring gets better with time but do try to pay attention to tenses.
Nah, he didn't just buy 3. He bought many that's why "..." at the end to indicate the list is ongoing.