Writing: 5 (writing is pretty good, not what I'd call perfect but it doesn't ruin the immersion/fun and no dumb mistakes either to be seen as of yet) Updates: 5 (cant judge right now but author said to post daily so its a 5) Story Development: 5 (as per my knowledge, it is taking a unique turn with the gamer as its apparent by "cursed" part in it.) Characters: 4 (cant say much about this since there aren't many characters, but "personally" I found about two of them to be acting weird and not according to their role(?) anyways, not much of an issue but it was something that caught my eye.) World Background: 5 (because it's a multiverse fic, the worlds are developed already after all but the lore behind acquisition of gamer system is somewhat interesting.)
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