Reviews of The Chaotic World I Was Reincarnated To

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Author noted expanded but pure OP world with some added stuff then he gives MC Zanpakuto lol it was interesting till he dumbed it down he has a system with Gacha he starts with good old training then goes over powered with gacha

Everything is great so far The chapter rates good The character design is good I've gotten attached to Eri-chan I'm not only that but I want more, the only thing that I say to improve is more conversation between characters as well there are plenty of them there's a lack of it between Eri and the MC as well as the mother and the MC The father as well so while I've gotten attached to them they'll act enough dialogue to truly attach my heart to them enough to root for them the whole time. So author great job so far just improve the dialogue a bit add a little bit more and a few more intimate moments and try not to skip early on as since you've made him a child and have allowed us to witness this point in his life you should try to expand upon it a little bit more obviously since you're sending them to do that program you should try to find a way to incorporate intimate moments there try not to skip it as much Skip the training but try to have a chapter to dedicated towards intimate moments.

Would’ve rated better but the system EVERY time calls itself the great system so it’s one of the more annoying system fanfics I’ve read and it was the first chapter that the system was introduced and it’s awful

Pros: it seems writer has modified the world a bit, like he made it bigger and ****, DOPE....plus there are OC related to major characters,,also dope,,so safe to think that cannon is out...its interesting for an FF if done right CONS: its retarded, MC dad,,,is a top figure, like-lets just say, if he wants your ass, unless you a CD or yonko, you screwed...and yet this ****er couldn't come and meet his son, like he took six years...retarded?...with his power, people ordering him wouldn't be able to stop him attending such an important event. -then theres the MC, he is stupid, like he trained even when he met his dad, like dude wore a blind fold, its stupid..why do something like this ....cause of **** like this, I cant help but expect a retarded, overly friendly naive MC,...like so far this dude hasnt shown any ***** like mind set..despite it clearly being shown that he was an ***** in a childs body.. SUggestion: Dont do retarded pointless ****....OP MC, dont neuter him...he is an *****, so make him like one, make him use his mind for his advantage, dont make him a pasny or a perverted retard...make him smart and secretive.......make him dark, he knows the dark ****, so dont make him a goody goody...be dark,..not evil DF suggestion: - wood style from naruto...with sealing ability to cancel DF's and wood stronger than metal....dude would be a god, make the wood strong like those magic trees that made the straw hats ship...MC would literally **** everyones ship as its made of wood....plus he could be rich as ****, considering this world is mostly water..he could create a ship company, and create clones to mange it.. -Gravity..logia,,,not fujitoras,,,,MC can completely manipulate gravity..he also has telekinesis.... -Yami Yami no Mi -Copy DF...MC can clone himself, by copying himself...he can clone things,,,he can even copy DF when awakened -Hydra....9 heads...9 elements

Well written, MC is actually likeable, and one of the few actually good marine stories out there.

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Начало многообещающее, соглашусь с комментарием ниже( который на 3 звезды ). Автор, хорошая работа, продолжай в том же духе. И я надеюсь у вас проскочит что то новенькое в произведении