Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Chaotic World I Was Reincarnated To

Pros: it seems writer has modified the world a bit, like he made it bigger and ****, DOPE....plus there are OC related to major characters,,also dope,,so safe to think that cannon is out...its interesting for an FF if done right CONS: its retarded, MC dad,,,is a top figure, like-lets just say, if he wants your ass, unless you a CD or yonko, you screwed...and yet this ****er couldn't come and meet his son, like he took six years...retarded?...with his power, people ordering him wouldn't be able to stop him attending such an important event. -then theres the MC, he is stupid, like he trained even when he met his dad, like dude wore a blind fold, its stupid..why do something like this ....cause of **** like this, I cant help but expect a retarded, overly friendly naive MC,...like so far this dude hasnt shown any ***** like mind set..despite it clearly being shown that he was an ***** in a childs body.. SUggestion: Dont do retarded pointless ****....OP MC, dont neuter him...he is an *****, so make him like one, make him use his mind for his advantage, dont make him a pasny or a perverted retard...make him smart and secretive.......make him dark, he knows the dark ****, so dont make him a goody goody...be dark,..not evil DF suggestion: - wood style from naruto...with sealing ability to cancel DF's and wood stronger than metal....dude would be a god, make the wood strong like those magic trees that made the straw hats ship...MC would literally **** everyones ship as its made of wood....plus he could be rich as ****, considering this world is mostly water..he could create a ship company, and create clones to mange it.. -Gravity..logia,,,not fujitoras,,,,MC can completely manipulate gravity..he also has telekinesis.... -Yami Yami no Mi -Copy DF...MC can clone himself, by copying himself...he can clone things,,,he can even copy DF when awakened -Hydra....9 heads...9 elements