The story is awesome. gain my attention from the first chepter. writing quality: Author's writing quality is very good although she very new writer and this is her first book. story development : From what I have read The story is not that of slow pace in which write add forcefull events to lengthen the plot. Character design : characters are designed well. but yes there is still chance of development. Updating stability is good. story is setup in mordon World the there is nothing much to say about world background. in the end it is not a perfect story but it's worthy of giving try. well this is only my review. but give it a try atleast. 👍 keep up good work author
To be honest I'm hooked from page1. The Fl kat is expressed so beautifully that I can read her emotions . how she's feeling sad, happy or nervous The boys well they are insanely gorgeous and mysteriously especially Lucas I love Cece the most she reminds me of my friend. I love the element of mystery and suspense in the novel if you like high scl stories thn it's for you. You're going to be my favorite author on webnovel. Just keep posting soon. I can not wait moreeeeeeeee. I'm rooting for Lucas-Kat. 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡Support this novel 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡Support this novel 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡Support this novel 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡Support this novel
Alright... I gotta say, this fic was not what I was expecting at all. Sadly, I'll have to drop it since it isn't my cup of tea, but I'm not saying this fic isn't bad, in fact, it's great! The plot moves slowly and mysteriously, causing the readers to embroil themselves deeper into the plot. The characters feel alive. They have their own goals, their own feelings, and their own mindsets. Don't let me get started on MC who clearly has mental trauma and is trying to cope with whatever she does. Story progression is paced very effectively, and executes it very well. Overall, this fiction is a great read for those who wants thriller and suspense.
The writing quality is so far really really good. There are a few minor mistakes but these are really less. Story progresses at a fair speed and the story is really amazing. Characters are one of the specialities of this book. They are flawless. Updating stability is cool. World background develops gradually along the chapters. Best of luck, Mista!
I really love this story and how the concept is i mean wow the start is sad with the girl losing both of her parents when she was only 9 in a car crash and then grace coming to take care of her i wanna know more about grace she came so suddenly is she evil is she the one tormenting the girl so chilling