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I'm working hard to be the number 1 web novel then the number 1 manga and then the number 1 anime

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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Commented

    This is better I understand a bit better now

    Ch -4 Kabuki class (Session 1) "The concept of a soul"
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    Kabuki Kai
    Martial Arts · CPSama
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Replied to Nomed_Forcraziness

    Yeah make auxiliary pages I think they will help understand basic things also I would say try adding things like a character proclaimed this or said this or asked or a character shouted after they talk so we know how they feel other than that this has a lot of potential keep up

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    Kabuki Kai
    Martial Arts · CPSama
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Commented

    done everything is reedited

    "I immediately left to go see what had happened and took the a fleet with me. Once we got there, I saw something that struck a pain down my chest; fire crossed the sands, and the bodies burnt to a crisp…" Commander Benkei looked dead in the eyes of the emperor who's expression changed to be concerned.
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    SamuraiXFantasy
    Fantasy · N_0_X
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Commented

    all corrected dont worry all reedited now

    "But.. but that's the thing sir they have.. and they're all dead.. " The solider looked to the ground
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    SamuraiXFantasy
    Fantasy · N_0_X
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Commented

    lol

    "Incredibly deep, we can't even see inside of this hole. It could lead all the way to Hell as far as we know." The solider splurged out
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    SamuraiXFantasy
    Fantasy · N_0_X
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Commented

    true sorry bout that its a habit lol

    Life and Death (Chapter 1)
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    SamuraiXFantasy
    Fantasy · N_0_X
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Posted

    i like the concept towards the first chapter which is what ive read so far it is really cool how it has those scifi aspects to it cant wait to read more definitely adding it to my library.

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    endeavour to utopia
    Sci-fi · gintoki_
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Posted

    I really love this story and how the concept is i mean wow the start is sad with the girl losing both of her parents when she was only 9 in a car crash and then grace coming to take care of her i wanna know more about grace she came so suddenly is she evil is she the one tormenting the girl so chilling

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    The Celestial Saga
    Fantasy Romance · _mystique_
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
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    i have just read the first chapter so far and cant wait to read more really liking the character Kehna she seems to play a big role in the story and is quite funny cant wait to see how this plays out especially how the setting is in Mexico

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    The last leaf on the tree
    Magical Realism · igbi9nak5
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X2mth
    Replied to Primate

    Thank you so much I will keep pushing to create a masterpiece

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    SamuraiXFantasy
    Fantasy · N_0_X
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    i like the concept on chapter 5 like Ko as a character as well it has potential i would say though some speaking bits is a bit confusing but that's pretty much it its a good novel keep it up

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    Kabuki Kai
    Martial Arts · CPSama
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    I liked this concept gonna read along more but so far it's good and has potential adding it to library to read more. It's a good scifi though

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    Team Alpha
    Sci-fi · Sailow_Sanchez
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    This is a good story and has go a lot of potential keep going man trust me you will get to the top if you push but yeah i really like the concept

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    Diary of a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Nikola1941
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    I like the conept it's got potenital if it's refined and put into shape it can become a great novel keep going Consistancy is key. It's good so far

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    The Dream to reach Elysian Fields
    Fantasy · Par0_per0
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    This concept is actually dope I like the idea of a chicken no one has done that and I think It will get pretty far in the future. Wooow keep going seriously it's got potential

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    Crystal Feather
    Fantasy · The_Celestial_King
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    I like your story a lot its got a very well writen plot and concept keep going trust me you'll get to the top that what I think anyway. Oh and your grammar was good aswell

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    ?!(×€×£×
    Fantasy · RenPenRen
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    I really like this it was amazing keep going trust me you'll make it just keep pushing to be consistant and to keep the quality at a high standard

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    Behind Our Masks
    Contemporary Romance · DamonKane20
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Posted

    I really like this novel really sad how she is getting bullied definitely gonna read more upload more chapters i need to know what happens next because its truly exciting. WOOOOOOOOOOOOW I LOVE IT !

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    Cottoncandy Skies
    others · BunnyD
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Replied to eyaggelia146

    Thanks i really appreciate it i will continue and get to the top thank you so much

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    SamuraiXFantasy
    Fantasy · N_0_X
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  • N_0_X
    N_0_X3mth
    Replied to Sailow_Sanchez

    Thanks for the review i really am gonna try the next arc after this is gonna be so good

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    SamuraiXFantasy
    Fantasy · N_0_X
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