CrossArk
hey I was hyping about what will happen next but damn it's the last update now I'm here still waiting, WAAAAAH POTANGENA(F*CK IN FILIPINO) I'M REALLY REALLY BOOOOREEEED BECAUSE OF THE F*CKING CORONA VIRUS SH*T THAT'S SPREADING LIKE CRAZY, NOW WE'RE LOCKDOWN AND I CAN'T EVEN GO TO HAVE MY DAILY MILKTEA
The overall work is pretty good but there is some things that it lacks to stand out. For one, your starting theme is very cliche in which the main character gets dumped by a love interest, which initiates the protagonist to acquire a special ability. In order to amend this error, develop a groundbreaking plot to draw in the readers.
This is one of the most amazing LitRPGs that I have ever read. The quality was awesome and much better than a lot of the other books I have read. The plot is great and, although the novel is short, there is some character development. The only thing I find wrong with this novel is the fact that there’s probably not going to be any more chapters.
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I enjoyed reading this. I read the entire thing in one sitting up to the latest chapter. I love the character, I especially like that he is intelligent, his attitude makes me like him, Seujoon is a perfect example of a character that you cannot hate. There is also how it is kind of similar to The Legendary Mechanic in that the MC becomes an NPC but he still lives in reality. Overall, I love it. I hope you keep up the great stuff!