Review Detail of the_game01234567 in The Bookworm Teacher becomes a Swordsman- on hiatus

The overall work is pretty good but there is some things that it lacks to stand out. For one, your starting theme is very cliche in which the main character gets dumped by a love interest, which initiates the protagonist to acquire a special ability. In order to amend this error, develop a groundbreaking plot to draw in the readers.