Reviews of 馬 / 马

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I gave it a try and I have to say it's good. The grammar may be off sometimes but it's readable and has flow. The progress is fine and the plot is interesting. Not a bad story and it looks like Author is really working hard to bring out the best.

The story was great and left me intrigued as to what would happen next. The writing quality is good, but could use some minor fixes. The world and character building were great, after reading I felt some type of attachment towards them, making me want to read more. I love system novels, and this one is a great addition to my library! I will continue to read as the story develops. I definitely recommend this novel!

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This work deserves a five star rating. The author has created a unique hero fantasy system with wonderful description. The synopsis of the story is enough to understand what this work consists. The updates are also stable. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I really liked your description and synopsis, it's quite good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.... .....

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I read it... the background and storyline is good... and there is very much way of development... but the most fk sh*t crap is the mf mc... it's just in one word ruined the story... and there is not even a speck of redeeming qualities in him... and so far his character development is not mentionable... read at your own risk... But have to say Good job author, the storyline you thought is awesome... keep it up.... and if possible development the mc fast with no fk sh*t drama to take time to development...

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Cool premise, cool names for characters and races, good character motivation. Not sure how scientifically accurate it is - but hey, this is fiction, with some sick magic elements, so whatever. Check it out.

Hi....Everyone Sorry for giving 5* to my novel shamelessly. I hope that you write a review regarding this novel. I would greatly appreciate that. Thank you. Have a nice day.