I read it... the background and storyline is good... and there is very much way of development... but the most fk sh*t crap is the mf mc... it's just in one word ruined the story... and there is not even a speck of redeeming qualities in him... and so far his character development is not mentionable... read at your own risk... But have to say Good job author, the storyline you thought is awesome... keep it up.... and if possible development the mc fast with no fk sh*t drama to take time to development...
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