Daonexus
this is not a rate for encouragements but simply my honest opinion. everything seems perfect, not just those fanfics with 'Idiotic heroes,anti-hero for win blablabla. . . . ' those are just empty words they say. equal exchange ideal is perfect to explain how hero-system work. you risk your life to protect people in exchange for fame, money. . . . fair thing. anyway please continue your hard work. 👍👍 thump-up from this fan of yours. [🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟]
The author probably isn't a native English speaker, but the quality of the story is still very good. The author should probably slow down the chapters because the word count is going down. You can slow down, but still, post 3 chapters a week. Being an alchemist is very suited for MHA world fics because it doesn't completely make the OC overpowered, but is also the complete opposite to the power of the antagonist thus makes the MC have his fight while still keeping the OC relevant
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Loved the fic. I will honestly say that the starting few chapters suck but it could be improved later. But the premise is good, I liked you avoided bullshit unreasonable explanations like he learnt a lot of things in his childhood and directly gave it to them in the form of knowledge at the start. But the only thing I would change would be Izuku being strong so fast. Like you could have just ignored him or better yet let him **** up his arms and then offer to repair them.