Review Detail of Daooffatty in The Alchemist Hero : Alchemo

Loved the fic. I will honestly say that the starting few chapters suck but it could be improved later. But the premise is good, I liked you avoided bullshit unreasonable explanations like he learnt a lot of things in his childhood and directly gave it to them in the form of knowledge at the start. But the only thing I would change would be Izuku being strong so fast. Like you could have just ignored him or better yet let him **** up his arms and then offer to repair them.