SkyThaKid
Gonna drop this Nappa is not a great character in the canon but it still there for a purpose, but author take that away. I can't see Nappa as a Good guy even Vegeta is not 100% a good guy and you did is make 180° personality change at Nappa. Your character is not credible at less reincarnate when Nappa is young or just make your own OC. If you don't like the MC then is a Shity fan fic so im gonna drop this.
I just Read the original DBZ saiyan Saga storyline again. with some slight differences. And thats it. The story was dropped after that. But again, the concept looked good. So sometime IN the future I’ll see if I can Get an inspiration to continue this. If the author is reading this, Then reply to me weather I can continue this on your behalf? Otherwise I’ll just write it differently with the same concept. Thanks.
For those who like good and kind guy stories this one is for you, but if you would like Nappa as he was in DBZ evil, then don't even start reading this, because you will be disappointed. Anyway gonna drop reading this, mainly because what the fu*k, Nappa as a good guy? Not even interesting concept to me, if he was evil or even more evil that original Nappa then hell yes I would read this.