Gonna drop this Nappa is not a great character in the canon but it still there for a purpose, but author take that away. I can't see Nappa as a Good guy even Vegeta is not 100% a good guy and you did is make 180° personality change at Nappa. Your character is not credible at less reincarnate when Nappa is young or just make your own OC. If you don't like the MC then is a Shity fan fic so im gonna drop this.
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