Nothing to say, just another guy searching for a perfect novel with evil lead.
Of you believe that rewrite would improve the story, and your writing skills, then just go for it!
I suspect that Mc is actually retarde.d, so it would be no surprise if he have told him 'yeah, you see you were character in children cartoon in my world, so I know the future, namek will be destroyed, lol. Sucks to be you elder, lmao' or something...
Had some hopes that he somehow will become stronger, like through killing others and absorbing them or something, guess not. Anyway,I like how you made his character, that's why I was reading till now ,but if he constantly gets squished to death by some random old farts or just controlled like puppet, it just too plain. Unless of course you can think of more ways for Mc to suffer in the future. But anyway, even if you decide to drop this, it was nice journey reading this story, cheers.
If he used it outside, there is huge chance that someone powerful would immediately notice it, and would just kill Mc and take the blood. At least that was Mc worries in previous chapters. But yeah, after coming to holy path he could have immediately looked for a place to check out that blood, but fighting monkeys is more important, and now that chick gonna get in his way, and he won't be able to do anything to her.
Read until the latest chapter and you will see a big difference. Of course, don't expect him to turn into 'good' or 'just', because he won't.
Review as of chapter 102 Really great story with a main character who actually uses his brain, which is rare those days. He knows his limits, and he doesn't try to bite more than he can chew, overall, I would say that he's 'Logical' if that makes sense to you. Over the entire story (102 chapters so far), he struggles to survive, and he doesn't mind using any means necessary to achieve his goal, or at least to stay alive. Those means include things like a massacre without discrimination (innocent people, young, old, kids, and whatnot), raping, stealing, etc. And that's why this story at least in my opinion is refreshing and different from mainstream stories on this platform. Basically, he's not mister Goody Two-Shoes*. That is rare considering that at least 90% of the stories revolve around ‘good’ and ‘just’ characters, which usually ends up as hypocrites, especially in CN novels, were slaughtering thousands of enemies is considered as ‘just’, but if enemies kill one of the ‘good’ side people, as the revenge, then they're evil and deserves to be damned, hypocrisy at its finest. Of course, there are other great stories with the evil main character, like Reverend Insanity, for example. But only few stories has the same quality you can expect from Reverend Insanity, and this one, at least so far looks really promising. Also, it has a normal cultivation system, so they don't have to rely on the bugs to cultivate, which was a big bummer for me in Reverend Insanity. In conclusion, if you like a cultivation setting story with an evil, selfish main character, who has brains not only for decoration then this story is definitely for you. *Goody Two-Shoes - An expression saying that someone is always on the side that is "good" and never taking a chance of being "bad" Old review(Contains strong language, don't read if you're easily offended), chapter 50 Overall it as great story, with a realistic main character. What I mean by realistic is, that he's not an idiot who saves other people in trouble or helps them. His top priority is to survive and get stronger, even if it means massacring other people without discrimination(good people, kids, old), which is totally understandable in apocalypse setting, after all top priority is his survival, not others. If all what I mentioned before sounds great to you, and you want to start reading this story immediately, be aware, because it's not always like that. And here is why, Mc is obsessed with couple of used puss*ies, and all what is mentioned at the beginning is irrelevant. He got so attached to couple of women, that he thinks about them not stop basically, always thinking about ways to help them, and making them stronger, free of charge. For example 'this fruit can increase stat points, have to bring some to Ashley', 'they have craftsmen who makes amour, have to get one for Ashley', her children are in trouble, Mc will say that he won't help her, but in the next chapter 'I saved her children, have to bring them to the Ashley immediately'. And what she offers him in return? Well, only her used puss*y and nothing else. And this obsession is constant, which ruins the story. Of course there is also Jane, but he rarely helps her, because she is not giving him any, lol. Worst thing is that Mc himself said there is nothing wrong with hookers, so why tf bother with random women. No offence, but if you were to wake up into apocalyptic sh*it world, I think top priority would be survival, by any means. In conclusion, this is great and refreshing story, with realistic main character but don't forget obsession with random women, which ruins the story, by fcking alot. Not sure if it will continue like that, or it will change in the future. Excuse me for the strong language, but that obsession of his was completely out of his character, which was built until meeting that girl.