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Reviews of Temari and the Crown Prince

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Temari and the Crown Prince

Foxy_Fairy

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

I should be honest and I say this has to be a movie! The opening intro to the world and the plot very hooking for me. Not all can execute such a hooking chapter like yours! Kudos! Grammar was okay and it was readable and I hope I can read a hundred chaps in one go! Haha nice nice nice!

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Foxy_Fairy
Foxy_FairyAuthorFoxy_Fairy

Hi. Foxy Fairy here. This is my first royal romance story and my first serialized story here in webnovel. I hope you take a chance to read this and if you like it, I hope you can leave a review and share it with other readers. :) I am enjoying plotting and writing this story so there will be a lot of twists and turns in store. :)

Zagawaprime
ZagawaprimeLv14Zagawaprime

I have not been as seen in by a story since Lucia and The Remarried Empress. It is unfortunate that many stories are over rated so the rating system is less meaningful. This story is deserving of a five star rating.

kpthe1
kpthe1Lv12kpthe1

A very interesting stoty. The way Temari's Character was designed and the other characters too is very refreshing and life like. This book is addictive and the same time immersive. I hope to see from chapters!!! Great Job!!

mrant12
mrant12Lv2mrant12

So far so good. Interesting theme. The overall writing quality was decent and there weren't flaws that struck me as 'glaring'. Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.

JohnDoer
JohnDoerLv5JohnDoer

The beginning is interesting and intriguing, making you want more. The characters are alive and behaving realistically. Thumbы up to author. Keep it up! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Rudia_Estelle
Rudia_EstelleLv2Rudia_Estelle

If there is a rating 6, I might give it six!! This story is really easy to get addicted to!!! Temari's behaviors are also cute and most importantly I FELT IN LOVE WITH RHYS from the start! The cover is also eye catching and your writing style is also easy to read! The pace is also well!! Will be waiting for future chapters, author!!

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

Beautiful cover page! The plot is interesting and your main character also. From the very beginning, you nicely describe the world you created. You're doing well! Good luck with the contest!

ilovematcha
ilovematchaLv1ilovematcha

This is a good story that more people should read. I hope more people can discover this gem. It has a good flow and it is obvious that the author really thought about the plot well

MrChinchila
MrChinchilaLv1MrChinchila

Ok, ok. Hear me out. I love your prose and pacing. Seriously. Everything just flows really smooth. This goes right to my library. I don't know if I can add much to the review, besides that I really enjoyed the read.

Nr_Yet1208
Nr_Yet1208Lv12Nr_Yet1208

It's a good story. I'm into mystical and creepy lands. (don't ask me why) The first chap was a little slow but the later ones had good pacing. the grammar and the use of tense could use a little work but overall, this was a good read.

Maryixxx
MaryixxxLv4Maryixxx

Wow! Another enthralling, intriguing, and great story I've ever read. The storyline is perfectly planned, every chapter was written adequately. Such a great book from you Author. Added it to my library, good luck and I'll be waiting for more chapters.

BlindBandit
BlindBanditLv10BlindBandit

The first thing I liked about this story is its storyline, grammar, writing style, and choice of words. The first chapter went at a nice pace. Definitely recommend it for reading. Keep up the good work, Author!

Moon_Bloom7
Moon_Bloom7Lv10Moon_Bloom7

Excellent book, Author!! The naration so smooth and it clearly pictures in my head. Already add to collection. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update] Good Job!

bakugo_thegreat
bakugo_thegreatLv1bakugo_thegreat

Promising story. Interesting development. still new and I still have many questions but I will keep on reading to know what will happen. Kudos to the author

Suminie_06
Suminie_06Lv1Suminie_06

So I came across this story accidentally and it seems interesting! I love the world building at the beginning and the writing voice is easy to read. Keep up the good work! 😊