I love the style of the novel! In the first chapter, the character statistics of our ML are fleshed out clearly and I like the way that he's portrayed in the book. While I think that there should've been more of an element of surprise between him and his sibling, most of the interactions are realistic and there isn't much of a problem with the characterisation. I think the world you've built is interesting and unique. Keep up the good work <3
Author here, shamelessly giving myself a 5 star. If you like a fast paced action packed story, then you might enjoy it. This is my first novel, so there will be mistakes here and there, but the quality will get better as the novel progresses. So I hope everyone who stumbled upon this enjoys the story. And if you don't like it, I am still grateful that you read it as it means a lot.