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I love the style of the novel! In the first chapter, the character statistics of our ML are fleshed out clearly and I like the way that he's portrayed in the book. While I think that there should've been more of an element of surprise between him and his sibling, most of the interactions are realistic and there isn't much of a problem with the characterisation. I think the world you've built is interesting and unique. Keep up the good work <3