Reviews of Successor of Primordial Origin

Updates are stable Story development is going good Character is explained slowly but well world background is the same This novel is one of those kinds that will most likely be liked by those who read Chinese cultivation novels.

Instead of calling this a story it's more apt to call it a summary Very dry very bland Instead of calling this a story it's more apt to call it a summary Very dry very bland Instead of calling this a story it's more apt to call it a summary Very dry very bland

very happy to see BTTH fan fic, first time seeing fan fic of BTTH, dont know if theres more or not, but this novel is very good, and system novel are always great.

Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........Went down hill fast.........

yeh.... nope the worst possible novel i've seen... He's attitude make me wanna punch him to death man. nah i'm still gonna give it a one star cuz that's the only way.....?

Nice work,but stupid mc....Author sama should utilized wish better...Alot of stuff that could had been better,but it had been ruined by forced plot of author sama...I will not say you sucks,since author sama is a fanfic sole writer without any official team helping..But at least,think carefully of the wish...My gosh,he just blow up wish like it's a trash....instant mastery is barely acceptable,but system that cant even be fully utilized?I mean,you can just specify the freaking system to used qi convert to currency,at least that show that you are the one wishing for that system,not the other way around!!!!

Mediocre character setting A wannabe softcore p.0rn(only the bad part, no the fun one) FFS even the ntr done badly Only good things of this novel are: the mc indeed op.... and pretty much that. The other good part because source material (btth) is a Good novel...I think. Oh and Harem....but ffs the way author done it so bad it becomes so cringy. My bet author mentality hasn't grown past 15 y/o. A horny kid

Want a story where the mc just doesnt leave his past hanging ? This novel is actually the few where for someone that is reincarnated with a "system" he actually has the ability to go back where he came from.Second life takes place in BTTH with a vanilla setting,for those looking for action packed the novel doesnt give that much its more to the "Im op i can do with a pinky" kind of feel.

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First time on webnovel but I already found a favorite fanfic. Keep up the great work author! Hopefully you don't drop this one since it's a really good novel.

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Read it even before it was rewritten. It's a really interesting and good novel which really makes the plot become unique. Hopefully author can make more chapters since its a very good novel.

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At first it's good, but then he waste his wish. Instead wishing something like Ultimate Tracking Power, he only wish for the location of his father. If he have unlimited amount of wish, then that's no problem but it's limited. Instead of wishing Ultimate System he wish for something mediocre. Well, a lot of nosense and non common sense here. So be carefull. The author said, it will be Netori or NTR but all I know was that, it full of romance. He maybe doesn't know what is NTR. Just because in the original both were meant together, that won't become NTR if in the Fanfiction both haven't developed love interest each other.

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