Review Detail of TheFluffyMan in Successor of Primordial Origin
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Nice work,but stupid mc....Author sama should utilized wish better...Alot of stuff that could had been better,but it had been ruined by forced plot of author sama...I will not say you sucks,since author sama is a fanfic sole writer without any official team helping..But at least,think carefully of the wish...My gosh,he just blow up wish like it's a trash....instant mastery is barely acceptable,but system that cant even be fully utilized?I mean,you can just specify the freaking system to used qi convert to currency,at least that show that you are the one wishing for that system,not the other way around!!!!
Successor of Primordial Origin
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I know man,but what makes me felt the stupidity is how he used the wish....For example,he wish for system since it could help him...But man,he just wish for system without stating it specifically?Its like asking for a full course in restaurant but without telling them your preferance,which set of full course,whats your allergy,how many people,etc....It just up to them to guess...The omnipotent wish is not dragonball wish that they tend to speak it in 1 sentence...He should specify it,I mean....He is a genius mc after all,thats why I felt dissapoint toward this dumb mc.... Even if he ask for system,he should have at least,at least ask for the qi convert to currency or just free for all since it his wish after all,not a system that implanted by other...
Suriel8224:He is strong already and has a system.
Hurm,since he could become dou di,I can agree on him not stupid...But really,that wish using is really stupid as hell....Even author sama flame me in comment yesterday since I critic his mc in using the wish in dumb way...
Maurz:I don't think the MC is stupid at all. But I agree the way he uses wishes is pretty fucking dumb. I mean he used a wish on finding people when he can teleport and ****, lmao.