Review Detail of VictoriousFighting in Successor of Primordial Origin

At first it's good, but then he waste his wish. Instead wishing something like Ultimate Tracking Power, he only wish for the location of his father. If he have unlimited amount of wish, then that's no problem but it's limited. Instead of wishing Ultimate System he wish for something mediocre. Well, a lot of nosense and non common sense here. So be carefull. The author said, it will be Netori or NTR but all I know was that, it full of romance. He maybe doesn't know what is NTR. Just because in the original both were meant together, that won't become NTR if in the Fanfiction both haven't developed love interest each other.