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Stepmother: I Am Asked To Give A Kidney To My Half-Brother

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ReaderLens
ReaderLensLv3ReaderLens

The system abilities are too broken to be realized even in a fantasy world. Also, our Mc is kinda foolish to indulge in banter against his half brother when he can simply offer bounty on dark web. Such childish fights remind me of palace harem dramas and female mc stories. This doesn't suite our male Mc at all.

Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv2Radioactive_Noodle

just from the synopsis you know this is gonna be Typical young master face slaping with no story or plot whatsoever he probably wont even do anything interesting

EternalAngel
EternalAngelLv6EternalAngel

raw link pls😄 ...........................................................................................................................

AlEl
AlElLv6AlEl

the MC should be very good in multiple choice 🤣🤣🤣 it will full of slaping face (hard) scenes. just hope for the best from author, 😎😎😎😎

1996611q
1996611qLv51996611q

Sinopsis sounds great until you actually reads it, it’s garbage full of face slapping. enemies suddenly crawling out from some corner and going after the MC.

TurkeySandwich
TurkeySandwichLv5TurkeySandwich

Good premise, how ever terrible..... well, everything else. Characters are so 1 dimensional. That everyone that's not on the side of the main character is a bad person. There's no logic to how the main character gets his rewards, it just shows up, blatant plot armor, which I find is just terrible story telling. World building is terrible, like it doesn't tell me if the company that the main character just happens to fall in his lap is suppose to bigger, smaller, or equal to the power of his father/mother-in-law company/family. Story is terrible written, only a good read if you're in a brainless mood.

akirakunz
akirakunzLv4akirakunz

This is trash. The system is the only ok tier aspect of this novel. The author have no life experience or made no effort when writting this novel because everything sound childish, illogical or would be dangerous to do in real life. Other than those scene that wouldn't happen in real life there is only badly written faceslap scenes.

asaade
asaadeLv5asaade

another trash face slapping novel with an enemy who wont die so the mc can face slap him all the time, and it was even an editors picked seriously? is the taste of the editor so low

SixSamsara
SixSamsaraLv5SixSamsara

Meh..................................................................................................................................................

Doesnot_matter
Doesnot_matterLv4Doesnot_matter

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GREEN_p34nutZ
GREEN_p34nutZLv6GREEN_p34nutZ

Reveal spoiler

RedsMelancholy
RedsMelancholyLv4RedsMelancholy

Has potential but unfortunately it's wasted. The author skips through time multiple times during the chapter, sometimes right in the middle of an ongoing scene. They only focus on either the face slapping or system. The MC gains 51% of the company and then working a chapter he's driving to the company in a luxurious sports car. Nothing in between. This comes off more like an outline than an actual story. Needs serious work.

Nephlia
NephliaLv3Nephlia

instersting... it seemed like i had an anime of this king before, there's only not the stock rewards etc... and its great that thr reward are business stocks and etc not cultivation resources or techniques... waiting for this...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Dragon_5081
Dragon_5081Lv2Dragon_5081

Lol it's always the terrible ones that get chosen it's so depressing that it's almost funny. Face slap face slap face slap ahahahahahhahahahaha so good

ZEUS666
ZEUS666Lv5ZEUS666

being chosen over a novel that had over a million stones, a mockery of the readers.................................. ..............................................

Radioactive_Noodle
Radioactive_NoodleLv2Radioactive_Noodle

How tf was this picked HOW

LucIf3R
LucIf3RLv5LucIf3R

I don’t know why these type of novels get chosen how can anyone expect that this will be good novel going forward, there is just blatant faceslapping nothing else mc just recieves companies aytime for faceslapping, after reading 30 chapters i don’t think that they will even keep on updating this novel and maybe will just drop it later as it should be.

Master_of_Sleep
Master_of_SleepLv6Master_of_Sleep

I don't know who the people rating this with 5 stars are, because this is a terrible story, I imagine if it was translated well, it would still only be a slightly smaller trash fire. Even if the MC was a compelling character, there are no good foils, no-one acts realistically, they are either cartoon bad guys with no foresight who seem to hold a death grudge with the MC, or fawning yes-men who believe MC is omniscient, and omnipotent. considering the title is also the inciting incident, I'm not sure how the author will stretch this book to have any meaningful incidents for much past where it is when he will probably conquer the world and be the lord high supercallifragilisticexpialidocious supreme ultra mega commander of the Mary Sue Earth Kingdom

Sandy_36
Sandy_36Lv3Sandy_36

I thought its going 'OK'. Then came, 'Emma Stone (Hermione in Harry Potter as per this idiot novel) going crazy for acting in advertisement for some chinese commercial firm'. Even if fantasy is without limits, there should be some common sense.

himitsu_desuu
himitsu_desuuLv3himitsu_desuu

i had successfully killed off the rest of my brain cells ..............................................................................................