Review Detail of TurkeySandwich in Stepmother: I Am Asked To Give A Kidney To My Half-Brother

Good premise, how ever terrible..... well, everything else. Characters are so 1 dimensional. That everyone that's not on the side of the main character is a bad person. There's no logic to how the main character gets his rewards, it just shows up, blatant plot armor, which I find is just terrible story telling. World building is terrible, like it doesn't tell me if the company that the main character just happens to fall in his lap is suppose to bigger, smaller, or equal to the power of his father/mother-in-law company/family. Story is terrible written, only a good read if you're in a brainless mood.