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Stalker from mirland

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"I don't understand why I had to be born into this world at all!" Bradley doesn't know about his past because he has been in an orphanage since childhood. His life in the harsh orphanage makes him feel like he is in prison, but luckily he always has a best friend who always helps him. However, his best friend is kidnapped by a mysterious creature from a world called Mirland, so he decides to enter a strange world that turns out to be inhabited by bloodthirsty creatures and is directly related to his past. Will he manage to solve everything before it's too late?

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Arnold_Kalalo
Arnold_KalaloLv1Arnold_Kalalo

A unique thriller story, not sadistic but interesting to read. I absolutely loved the detailed portrayal of the characters and the composition of the dialog is just right and very neat. However, there are some grammar mistakes, Curious about the ending, keep up the good work!

Flaim
FlaimLv4Flaim

A lot of mysteries while reading the synopsis.💓💓💓 nice plot development. Keep up author

Vimbai_Murindagomo
Vimbai_MurindagomoLv1Vimbai_Murindagomo

Wow! The way you open your stories, is powerful with lots of pace. The action is engaging and just draws in the reader. This is what a good book should be, really enjoyable and not a struggle to read. However the beautiful flow of your story is interrupted by mistakes of tense, and expression. I will give an example in chapter1 where you say,"fastened their movement...", You could have said hastened or quickened, fastened has to do with tightening and not movement. Apart from the errors, your stories are powerfully and well plotted.

SpareMyInk
SpareMyInkLv2SpareMyInk

Okay, this is the first horror thriller I ever read and it's very good according to the normal book standard... Adequate pacing, great world building, you name it.... YAY to the first thriller I've ever read!! Great job author!!

Bankets
BanketsLv3Bankets

I can handle the details but I don't know for other people. The length of each chapter is not too short but not too long either. Is that good? In my case, I don't have any problems about the length of chapters. I liked the suspense factor from the first chapter. I want to read but there are only few chapters so I'm going to dropped it to stock the chapters. Once it reach let's say 50 or so chaps, I might comeback to it and make a proper review.

Ebei_Lijan
Ebei_LijanLv1Ebei_Lijan

Great improvement from previous chapters, story is now more understandable. I rarely read horror fiction like this but was able to go through 6 chapters without screaming. 👏👏👏👏👏 Best of luck bro

Vee_Uzomah
Vee_UzomahLv2Vee_Uzomah

Yeah… this is giving cinderella vibed. Csnt wait fir brendan to find out where he comes from🌝🌝

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