Spartans in Starwars

This is my first attempt at writing a fanfiction, so any ideas or correcting is most appreciated. I work two jobs and have school so don't know how often I can update. Synopsis: *sigh* I'm tired of all of this shit. Everyday the same old shit day in day out. All I want to do is play halo and watch starwars. Man fuck college and fuck work they both suck. *ding dong* I wonder who that can be. (Stranger) There has been a major gas leak and you need to leave the complex now. *KABOOM* I DON'T OWN HALO OR STARWARS I am just trying my hand in writing a fanfic mostly because I am bored and just enjoy fanfics. I don't have a lot of time on my hands so I appreciate any ideas or comments on how to better the fanfics.