Reviews of Son of Satan
Son of Satan
SlothElephant2k18
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The fanfic is not bad, of course it is not at the level of the original top 200 but it doesn't have to be. A fanfic is not a professional job so I tend to be less demanding. The reasons why I give 3 stars instead of 5 are: 1) The way the author discarded takashi and hisashi was so poorly done that it became very clear that it is only the author getting rid of characters he doesn't like or facilitating the harem. Not only did the two die at the same time and stupidly, as the MC could have tried to cure them both with the anihilation maker, but he preferred to just kill them without even thinking. To make matters worse the MC overcomes the loss of the two best friends so fast that a few moments later he is already making references to jojo and complaining about people without culture. If it was so easy to discard the two, why the hell did the author bother with the relevant leagues in the fanfic before the apocalypse? 2) The mc's powers are so random that he never used most of them. They are not bad powers, it is just that the author was giving several different powers and did not bother with mixing with the combat style of the MC. I saw some people complaining about the items not being well explained, but that doesn't bother me because the gate of babylon is more about quantity than quality, so it is normal for the mc to accumulate several things with the majority being irrelevant to the story. The MC has a system, but he's not the type with lvl up, it's more of a status screen that says his powers and gives a random prize every day. It is basically a gatcha system, the prizes depend on luck (author's will) but there is no roulette wheel like in other gatcha fics out there, he just clicks the button and receives the prize. 3) The fanfic is more of the same, another harem fic starting in hisghschool of the dead where the mc collects all the girls for the harem. The world seems to be better used than in fics where it is only treated as a tutorial, but even so I have read so many that start in highschool of the dead that I wonder if the authors forgot about SAO, Zero no Tsukaima, To love Ru , Asterisk Wars, Re Zero, Kono Suba and etc. There are several other worlds that would be great starting places (mainly konosuba) but people insist on using highschool of the dead. 4) This is common in many fics, the mc looks like someone who received the player's mind. He did not go through anything that justifies a strong mentality, on the contrary he had reasons for some depression when he lost his friends and even then he seems to have forgotten. It would be ok if the author gave the mc something like the player's mind, but as he didnβt make sense the current personality of the mc. I even liked the MC before the apocalypse, he looked like a normal and very kind guy like the original Okumura Rin, but when the apocalypse came it went down the drain. 5) (This is more of a concern than a current problem) Currently the MC is op for the world it is in, but at the same time the difficulty of the world seems to be about to rise, so the MC probably has many challenges ahead, however with the ease that the mc gets op powers today, this fic has a good chance of becoming one more with the op mc where the author ends up discarding due to the blockade that this causes. My final analysis is that I recommend this fanfic for those who have read many and have a mentality like mine that fanfics don't have to be perfect, in a way it is the duty of readers to give reviews like this so that the author can consider and try to improve if applicable. I will continue reading and recommend that others try this fanfic, even giving 3 stars.
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In the first part I thought it was a great idea with a lot of posibilities but then the MC receives some sort of a system but it's never explaines in detail . The explanation of the powers , items that the MC gets and new abilities or training are explaines in a such bad way that I got dizzy just by trying to have a general idea. Unfortunately I will stop reading here. I can see that the author has tried and is not " horrible " as the main idea is good, but it needs to be polishe A LOT.
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