In the first part I thought it was a great idea with a lot of posibilities but then the MC receives some sort of a system but it's never explaines in detail . The explanation of the powers , items that the MC gets and new abilities or training are explaines in a such bad way that I got dizzy just by trying to have a general idea. Unfortunately I will stop reading here. I can see that the author has tried and is not " horrible " as the main idea is good, but it needs to be polishe A LOT.
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