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A cool way to start! A nice introduction to reincarnation! A good pace for chapters! Snake race! I think. This snake would cross the dragon gate after travelling nine floors of two star world and become a dragon ti soar through the skies!! Author you made a good story, just keep updating at steady rate, I'll suffice for readers and never dare putting more filler, it's a non human genre so it'll affect your story. Hope you makes a good finishing with 300-600 chapters!!
A really nice work you have put up here, Bro. The story progresses quite well and is well paced. The setting of a goal for the MC to pursue early on defines it nicely and allows readers to look forward to it. The theme and setting is unique and really to my liking. Makes you curious to know what will happen next. A spelling mistake here and there should be taken care of. Looking forward to it.
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