ghostrino
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As one of the early readers who read this story before it was published online, all I can say is this is an awesome story. The interaction of King with his daughter, his reactions when he's suddenly in different world, all are more human like than most of the stories on this platform. I am looking forward for more chapters. I just hope, the author, who's also as lazy as me, works hard for this story.
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lmaoπ
Sun Wukong?
Writing quality and pacing after the first chapter was good. It started with a bang, too abrupt for me, but well it became better afterwards. With my initial reading of first few chapters, I can tell that it'll be a good story and you should try it out. I'll keep following the story. Speed up the story.....
damn you forgot that they were trying to r**e her??
FLUFFY!!!
Hello everyone this is my second review as an author. If you are going to read this novel, I'll warn you ahead of time, this story becomes quite idotic and unrealistic from chapter 50 till chapter 80. As a new author and a full time student, I got side tracked because of lack of time and thus I destroyed the story. When I realised what happened, it was already late. So I dropped this book for quite some time and now I am picking this up again in an attempt to save this beautiful story. This, as my first story, holds a special position in my heart and I really want to give it a good end. I am not a proffesional and I write whatever comes to my mind, so if at any point of time you find any nonsense please comment and tell me. I'll think about the plot again and try to fix that if possible. And since I am shameless, I am giving myself a five star review.
this isn't too much for him??
lol, that's what most Apple customers think.
Hell Yeah! System is here for rescue operation.
FK!! ππππ
Hidden System Detected!!