ghostrino
A recent fiction lover and writer.
Writing
of reading
91
Read books
Badges
10Moments
53
ghostrino1yrCommentedHe's a man of culture
This book has been deleted.- ghostrino1yrReplied to Mark_D_Dragneel
- ghostrino1yrPosted
As one of the early readers who read this story before it was published online, all I can say is this is an awesome story. The interaction of King with his daughter, his reactions when he's suddenly in different world, all are more human like than most of the stories on this platform. I am looking forward for more chapters. I just hope, the author, who's also as lazy as me, works hard for this story.
- ghostrino1yrReplied to t3ksp3c
3
"I will never be merciful to my enemies!" Su Mo said flatly. - ghostrino1yrCommented
lmaoπ
"From now on, I am Luo clan's steward. In ten years, I will raise the Luo clan above the Veiled Dragon Pavilion!" - ghostrino1yrCommentedCh 6 Vile Servant Actually
- ghostrino1yrCommented
Sun Wukong?
"My god, the people from the Divine Monkey Palace have come to the Southern Mountain Village!" - ghostrino1yrPosted
Writing quality and pacing after the first chapter was good. It started with a bang, too abrupt for me, but well it became better afterwards. With my initial reading of first few chapters, I can tell that it'll be a good story and you should try it out. I'll keep following the story. Speed up the story.....
- ghostrino1yrCommented
damn you forgot that they were trying to r**e her??
Anyway, he wouldn't be jealous of a girl, so he smiled. "Well, they just wanted your money, not your bag, so I don't think it'll work." - ghostrino1yrReplied to attack_the_turnip
FLUFFY!!!
If we ignore his slim body and imagine him as someone with a bit more fat, then he'll definitely look like "Fluffy"! - ghostrino1yrPosted
Hello everyone this is my second review as an author. If you are going to read this novel, I'll warn you ahead of time, this story becomes quite idotic and unrealistic from chapter 50 till chapter 80. As a new author and a full time student, I got side tracked because of lack of time and thus I destroyed the story. When I realised what happened, it was already late. So I dropped this book for quite some time and now I am picking this up again in an attempt to save this beautiful story. This, as my first story, holds a special position in my heart and I really want to give it a good end. I am not a proffesional and I write whatever comes to my mind, so if at any point of time you find any nonsense please comment and tell me. I'll think about the plot again and try to fix that if possible. And since I am shameless, I am giving myself a five star review.
- ghostrino1yrCommented
this isn't too much for him??
"Xiao Meng, don't worry about the money. This isn't too much for him right now. And also, next time when I earn more money, I will definitely buy an even better computer and even prettier clothes for you." Si Chen patted his chest and said in a determined tone. - ghostrino1yrCommented
lol, that's what most Apple customers think.
In the end, he decided to go with the Apple Matte 5. First, because it was more expensive, and he thought that more expensive equals to better performance. Second, because it looked better. - ghostrino1yrCommented
Hell Yeah! System is here for rescue operation.
[Godly Investment System has been activated] - ghostrino1yrCommented
FK!! ππππ
"How the hell do I know where she's gone? It's possible that she's hanging out in the United States, possibly in Europe, or anywhere the Internet can reach. But for now, her temporary home is inside the Titan supercomputer in the United States Department of Energy's Oak Ridge National Laboratory," Ren Hong said casually. - ghostrino1yrCommented
Hidden System Detected!!
"Forget the praise, we may be able to show off in front of others, but with you here, you're like the Five-Finger Mountain and we're being squashed to death under it. We know that you're a monster who successfully completed 28 majors in a year and a half; how in the living hell is that possible? The majors even include the nonsensical subjects of astrophysics, bio-genetic engineering, etc. And most importantly, you accomplished such a feat in a year and a half just by soaking up in the library. Whenever I think about that, I can't help but feel so powerless!" Zhang Han and the rest looked defeated.
