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Detektive_one5mthReplied to UelUelCh 11 Chapter 11: The Changing Universe- Detektive_one5mthReplied to jayPreak
Rank less = without a rank. wouldn't even be rank 1. should I change it to rank 0?
|*Resident Kane would be rankless in the supposed hypothetical case.*| - Detektive_one5mthReplied to jayPreakCh 11 Chapter 11: The Changing Universe
- Detektive_one5mthReplied to jayPreak
Bruh thats way funnier than what I was going for. it was supposed to be Chucky with a knife, like from the movie xd
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The artifact concept is a nice touch to the worldbuilding. I especially like when technology gets a magical rework in stories 🫡
Slime-Watch is a combination of a Relic Replica called Rolex-Watch and a Monster-Core from the Rank-0 Slime monster. It's a simple Mana-Tech that can tell the time of day and allow us to use the storage-skill and regeneration-skill of the Slime monster. - Detektive_one6mthReplied to UelUel
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"ALEXA, turn on all the speakers and run the highest frequency that can be generated quickly." - Detektive_one6mthReplied to UelUel
I had considered that. but eventually I decided that this won't be a system novel. Of course I'll consider ways to make it easier to remember technical stuff like auxiliary chapters or something else.
|*All the levels begin together, but due to how much time each level takes to complete and the size of the area it affects, we can divide these phenomena into different level. The first level is the personal merger. The micro level from where it all begins. It's the fastest level and takes about a month in human time to finish. This is also the only level about which you are authorized to know about currently. Do you want me to explain its stages in detail now?*| - Detektive_one6mthReplied to jayPreak
Unironically, so true 😭
Getting up, he organized his desk first, before deciding the plan for the rest of his day. No doubt he was going to climb out of silver today. Definitely. - Detektive_one6mthPosted
Post apocalyptic world with a VR theme is a unique take that I am reading for the first time. So far I have liked the progression and sense of mystery about the reason behind alien invasion and VR games creation. The writing is very good and the main character is fleshed out really well. The game mechanics are something to look forward to as we progress and understand more about the virtual world. Overall its a great read and I'd reccomend others to give it a try.
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Mans legit talking to his body... sigh hunger can make many of us go crazy indeed 🤣
This book has been deleted. - Detektive_one6mthReplied to UelUelCh 2 Chapter 2: Almost a normal day
- Detektive_one6mthReplied to Kitshaar
yep
Kane chuckled at Zephyr's comment. The "flying donut" was an inside joke from one of his previous dreams. - Detektive_one6mthReplied to Kitshaar
Itna gyan mat pel 🤣🤣
My voice, unfamiliarly confident, carried through the room as I began to speak about quantum superposition and the many-worlds interpretation. I delved into the complexities of parallel universes coexisting in a state of quantum ambiguity. The white board behind me was covered in equations, as I educated the audience about the beauty of parallel universes existing, while my other hand still held the bowl of ramen. The words flowed effortlessly from my lips, as if I were an expert in a field I had never truly delved into. - Detektive_one6mthPosted
Overall, the story as far as I read is a fun progression, with nice world building done. The interaction of the three main characters is nicely showcased and the conversations are always nice to read through. The buildup about the world history, hints about the 1st world, 2nd worlds create a good tone to start this story. Especially the raw emotions reflected during the starting help to draw in the reader. Great job and keep up with the work.
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