Reviews of She Will Be Mine

Here’s my shameless review of my story lol. I also wanted to clarify a few things about this novel. The story does have mature content, for example some violence and ***. However it will not have any type of forceful intimacy. Its going to be all consensual. I’m an ******* writer so I welcome all constructive criticism. I will try to update 2-3 times a week. Maybe more. Again, I’m not a professional writer and this is more of a hobby for me. Also if my grammar is off I do apologize. While I am in the states, english is not my first language.

Part of a review swap, (Chapter 13) (╥﹏╥) I regret reading this so quickly, and yes this story is very good. I'm definitely keeping this in my library. Writing Quality: The author mentioned that English isn't their strongest language. Regardless of this though, the overall flow of the story wasn't disrupted. Aside from a few minor errors with grammar. Perhaps a few paragraphs could have been broken down too. 4/5 Updates: Too soon to tell. Story Develooment: The pace is quite slow now, but that's only because this is the beginning chapters. I wonder how long until the truth regarding why Saya left Haru is revealed. Need story time for this, I'm guessing it will gradually be revealed. She left because she learned things about Haru - but who told her these things? right now I'm more focused on the romance than crime aspect, but it's interesting to see. Character Design: As of Chapter 13, I actually feel like we know more about Haru than Saya. Yes there's more background information on Saya so far. But it feels like Haru's character is more developed - for one, young master, bad temper - and yet is kind to the girl he loves. Only treats her well and nobody else. Saya, have yet to form a opinion other than her insecurity and focus on education. World Background: So far I'm not sure how the crime stuff is woven into the story, can't make the connection. But I do want to see more of it, how will this tie into the romance? Overall: 4.6/5 - You have a solid story here author, if you work on editing your chapters. Add more explanation and work on the FL character more then I guarantee this story will become better. Please keep up the good work.

Great story with an interesting premise, and I'm really enjoying your [edited] or [revised] chapters, it's clean and well written. Keep the chapters coming, I'll be adding this story to my library. :)

I absolutely love this and I can not wait for more. I think this is so amazing. OH MY LORD this is absolutely amazing. I can't wait for more

Was reading anither novel and had maaaad deja vu about this novel!!! Ughh one of the first novels i read and i was HOOOKED!! Sad to see all the chapters gone but when author comes back I’m sure it’ll be better than ever ;)) tysm author and can’t wait to see what else u write <3

Wow! The story line is great! ❤️ the FL and ML characters! It’s intense and can’t wait for the next page . That last chapter was awesome! Please update soon!

it was a very good read, I thoroughly enjoyed it, and couldn't put it down, I just wish she would post more chapters I want to see how the story ends.

It is amazing but the author should update it ............,....,,,,................................................................................

Hi author ... It's really amazing story so far... Concept is good..... Says and haru's chemistry is too good.... Day by day it's getting more interesting...

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Very interesting background for this novel. Forensics, criminology interests most people. Characters are also developing well. In 23 chapters, not much of the past is revealed as yet. But it looks appealing. Hope more chapters come in.

I give a massive thumbs up for the wonderful story you gat....so far so good,what can I say....hmmmmmm..well I will be straight....Amazing storyline,nice plots,intriguing ,character presentation is waoh....definitely can't wait for new updates.....keep it coming dearie

story was fabbbbbbbbbbb you bed only one think is update fast and characters was also awesome so plzzzz don't stop to writing 😍😍😍😍 the another charecthers also great that young master I thing he is the physics plz write fasttttt

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Nice and very readable. Yoovearly to fully comprehend the story. But I love the way the mystery is unfolding. Well done carry on. I hope you carry on and give more chapters.

I sped through 14 chapters so quickly TwT I LOVE psychological/crime so this is great!! The romance/crime reminds me a little of when a snail falls in love; i get similar vibes. of course, the plot is completely different and the characters are unique in their own way. I love the descriptions-you can easily tell who is who and you get attached to Saya and co. so quickly. Definitely adding to my library :D I'm so hyped to know why Saya left!